rate_review Reviews

I like the realism you express in your story, not many authors detail such things as safe sex and the utilization of condoms. It is a nice touch, adding such aspects and issues that are relevant to people.

I find it refreshing to finally read a story where the characters emotions are expressed so eloquently.

I don't have any criticism here whatsoever that I can think to mention.

Yum and such and yeah.

So, I gave into temptation.

Finally.

I joined.

I wrote.

Read and review, puh-lease?

- UK

WONDERFUL!!! really anxious for the rest!please...lol

Bloody fantastic.

That was hot, VERY hot.

*is in dire need of a cold shower*

Ok runs and takes a shower :P.
That was wonderful. I'm in love with them both. please update.

Review of chapter 17 - WOW, that was exhausting, and most satisfying.......mmmmm warm, happy grin....:)

wow that was hott hope u update soon

in aspect of the chapter's title I thought the hot sex both are craving for was going to ensue but I suppose that was a wrong guess. Although I'm sure the next chapter is going to be like a firework. I have to admit I had a slightly (but only slightly!) different feeling while reading this chapter. It may be due to the fact that they are visiting Tamsin's parents. I found the "table scene" (you know which one I mean, right?) quite hot and funny at the same time. Gerry must have felt very uncomfortable, haha. I really liked this chapter and your writing style got me hooked so that I read a chapter at least twice :) And it helps me improve my english skills at the same time, too, haha.

Yaaaaay. 'Bout time.

UPDATE!

Wow! Not sure what else to say. It's writing of this calibre that's lured me back to AFF after a long absence. Incredible stuff.