rate_review Reviews

That was an awesome chapter so powerfully emotional, keep up the great work!

I just read your entire story from the first chapter, i really love your steamy love scenes, i especially like your first 3 chapters they are so intensly sexy and exciting. You can really feel the energy that builds up between them. Can't wait until the next chapter keep up the awesome work!

The growing relationship is moving along perfectly and at realistic pace. The way Gerry handled the assault was really very good and it was so nice to see him so concerned and protective. They really are good together and just have to work on their committment issues.

I love that it was Gerry who felt the need to clarify that they couldn't sleep with other people. I just hope he can keep to that while he is away working. I hope you update soon.

I'm really enjoying this story. The chemistry you have created between the two characters is amazing. You have a wonderful talent for writing sexual scenes which are steamy and sexy rather than dirty. It's nice to see a story dealing with the conflicting emotions of one night stands, and how for most people it's not easy to just walk away and feel nothing about it.

I love the way the first few chapters were very impersonal, no names mentioned, just very detached which is perfect for two strangers meeting. However, after their encounter I note that 'Gerry' is now used which makes him more real to us. A real person with real feelings and emotions.

Also, great job with the dream sequence. It was an absolutely perfect way of showing us how conflicted Gerry is feeling about his encounter the night before. I can't wait to keep reading this amazing story.

Review for Chapter 6

I really love the character of Tamsin. I had a feeling that she might not be all that used to one night stands... and i'm kind of glad it's not her usual thing. It's great that she and Laura had a bit of role reversal the night before and now Laura is actually on a date with Brian... it's a perfect way for Gerry and Tamsin to be thrown together again.

Terance is hilarious. I was chuckling to myself as I imagined him flirting outlandishly while poor Tamsin just wished she could disappear. Also, the meeting between Gerry and Tamsin was perfect. No better way to get them talking that put them in that kind of situation. I can't wait to see what Gerry has to say after following her outside.

Review of Chapter 7

The dinner scene was perfect and so realistic. I could just feel the awkwardness between them as well as the butterflies. I swear I felt my heart flutter a little when he wiped away the chocolate from her mouth. I love how Gerry seems to be always finding a way to spend more time with her without even realising what he's doing. Their chemistry is just amazing.

Also, I love how Terance disappeared with the hot actor. That had me giggling.

Review of Chapter 8

This chapter had me laughing most of the way though it. Poor Gerry having to restrain himself! I love that Tamsin didn't just give into sleeping with him when she wasn't sure about it, especially after how she felt about the night before. The rules they made up for each other were hilarious and I knew they would have trouble sticking to them. Can't wait to read more.

Review of Chapter 13

I loved the date that they shared in the park and how they seemed so at ease with other. I practically swooned when he laced his fingers through hers. You have such a great way with both smut and romance. I already love these two as a couple. Gerry seems to genuinely care about Tamsin, even if he doesn't really understand his own feelings yet. It was just so sweet when they went to bed and he just held her as they fell asleep. Can't wait to see what else is in store for them.

so....this story is one of my favorites....is it complete or are you going to update more?

! great well written story ! ! ! !