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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome, love it. can't wait to read the next chapter
schedule
December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not usually into M/Fs but this is good.
Update soon!
darkangel1210
Update soon!
darkangel1210
schedule
December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. The only criticism I could say is to probably have shorter sentences. Some paragraphs had 3-4 lined sentences which could've been broken down, but otherwise, keep it up!
schedule
December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue? It's an enthralling story.