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for FIRE OF THE NIGHT

by Kat1975

person Liz
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW! Gerry missed her! That's beyond cute. Seems an old dog can change it's tricks. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. This is one of my favorite fics!
person blondiexoxo
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i like the breakfast part it was sweet lol well hope to read more
person blondiexoxo
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey love it such tension between them. cant wait till more come out
person lily
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please keep updating...this is officially my new favorite!
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I know you´ve asked this a while ago, but the site didn´t let me post a reply at that day. So I´ll answer your question regarding the characters and their names now: I think it was good to give them names. While anonymity adds a certain mystery, it´s hard to maintain with a longer story. As soon as you have more than one male and one female character it becomes confusing. So your decision was right.

But also apart from that your story is very good. It´s nice to see how the characters develop and interact. I hope it´ll go on like that.
person Sparky
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Groans!- Oh my God. I feel so bad for the both of them...and at the same time, I'm jealous.

Can't wait for the next!!!
person Mrs.DarkFrost
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please?
person Cher N
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I see the plot thickens!!

I absolutely LOVE that he followed her. Now, just exactly what will he say to her...and she to him????

Keep going, I can't wait for more.

Cher N

P.S. LOVED the little aside about Orlando.....
person hjz
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A well written story. I am really enjoying it please update soon.
person Rosei
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot characters! Yummmmmmmmmm! Get back to that keyboard!!! NOW!!!
Thanks! Rosei