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by coloryourworld

schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol the characters that you have created sound like the perfect people to keep this story going. I love the fact that youve created a man for Cat that doesnt need to voice opinions or thoughts so that Cat will get it. That they understand each other without talking. I also like the fact that Ande is really close to Cat and that she understands and just wants to see her friend happy.
I cant wait for the next chapter!

P.S Id love to see a chapter written on Cat taking Evan home for a family holiday or something. Setting a scene in where Evan is able to show Cat just how much he loves her.(just a thought)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter...but keep the updates coming :D
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great love at first sight story. You definitely have this girl sighing and wanting more.
person Kahoko
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Evan and Cat!! Are you going to write any more?? They seem sooo cute and perfect together! I love how you are able to make characters that fit together! I really like them! Thanks so much for writing such a great fic!!

Kaho
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the story so far please continue
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like
person Eboni
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evan and Cat seems to be things along a little too fast in their relationship. I mean they hardly know each other. Even though, I would like to see where this story goes. Update soon.
person stina
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope that wasnt the end
person Kelly
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really awesome! I really like the idea and the way you describe the scenes, wow the detail really helps. Keep going it's great!