rate_review Reviews

I would love to read more of this story if possible...
Really good work...

I completely feel you should continue with this story. It's gotten off on a wonderfuol start and I think it holds great promise. Please keep it up.

Wow! this is a really good story! I can't see why it'd be unpoplular, and i really like it! poor killian, poor theodore! awwww! *squeals* I think you have a great concept going and i haven't found a good story like this in a while! And your grammar doesn't piss me off! Kudos to you! You might be right about the summary though, but the story is wonderful! i hope you continue with this, and please update soon! Rock on, my friend!

i read everything you had at once and this is what I think, I think that the idea is a good one but it is going to be hard to make it come together. First of all the thing that drew me was Killian's and Theo's relationship then I found out that you were going to make Mark and Kill the focusinstead was a little letting down. The story itself was good the descriptions full and vivid however it lacked a certain luster. What I mean is it wasn't exciting. i don't know what it is but it needs some excitement. Its like a picturesque emma thompson movie when you're looking for a nicole kidman moulin rouge.

I love this story of yours. It is first of all so well written. When I read your story I never have any problems folllowing what is happening, or who is talking or what their talking about. Maybe that doesn't make any sense, but I have read so many fictions that I have to stop reading because the author doesn't write the story where it is easy to follow and know what is happening. Another thing I like about your story is (this might sound strange) but it is not totally made up of sex scenes and rape scenes. I like those type of fictions, but every once and awhile I like to have a great fiction writer like yourself make a story that deals with relationship problems that doesn't revolve around only the sex and rapes of the main characters. I think all the characters you have introduced to us readers are very well formed, I have definetly fallen in love with Killian. And I can't wait to see what having Theo come into his life will do to his and Mark's relationship. I am really hoping it doesn't effect Mark to much because he has also grown on me as well. Well here is my plea, PLEASE keep writing chapters for this story. I would love to see where this is going and even if it takes you forever to finish because you don't think people care for it know that I do, and I beleive that no matter what readers think an author needs to write what they feel like writing, and this seems like a story you want to write. Once again you have a supporter for White Flag and I will be following it till it is finished whenever that might be.

Thanks

I love this story!! ^^ Characters are so interesting and I can't wait to see what will happen!! So please continue!! Do not stop!! I beg you!! No, I am demanding it! XD

(What a bad review, will make a better one while properly awake... ^^)

I really like this story and I hope you will continue to update it. I really like the charaters and really want to know what happens to them. I like that there is more story to this and not just slash (although slash is good). Please keep writing!
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