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for The Virgin

by bigman

schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
alucinante historia, y que bien la "cama" que le hicieron a jean, espero una pronta actualizacion, ana maria
person bella
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you! The first chapter dammit it was goooood!
person Mari
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucking god the first chapter........Im speachless it was so I could feel it! Its completley impossible to cum that many times but shit thank you, the oral and rim were the best. *drools*
person Agent-G
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5

Well I'm gald they got all that sorted out. Now we get to the date and hopefully them having a very nice time after it lol. Hey at least this time no one will interupt them.
person keyonnamc
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't that is such a big deal...I mean he's not going to tell on them, and she has power over both. So actually she should be happy. She can bribe them, because both have something they fear. Plus it gets the brother off her back.
...(Y)
.(^_^)
person Agent-G
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

Well that was certainly unexpect with her getting fucked by him, and a bit fast too how that scene went by. it just kind of seemed like you slapped that in there at the last second kind of. But anyway sure that was a hell of a shock for her but she should look on the bright side on the one hand her brother can never tell on anything that she dose with her boyfriend ever. If they don't want her to have sex then they most likely feel the same about their son unless they are totally unfair and are hyporites.

I hope she gets over it I mean she has been friends with her forever and sure its werid having her date (and fuck) her younger brother but in the long run I hope she accepts it and moves on. Besides now at least she and her brother could cover for each other just in case cause if one falls changes are both will.
person Agent-G
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NIce story you got here I really like it and I can't wait to see how it all plays out with these characters. Although leaving off with just a promise of a blow job lol, nasty cliffhanger dude.
person keyonnamc
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW...What a friend. I'm speechless...I could never do that for a friend, that's not my style. She's going to owe Mary big time. Update soon...
...(Y)
.(^_^)