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please update!

Yay! You updated! Wow, Shade's a slut. And one who doesn't think about his actions at that. I hope that he has to do quite a bit to woo the badass bounty hunter, 'cause honestly, I wouldn't touch the elf with a ten-foot pole. Hope you write more though! However it continues, I'm sure it'll be good.

xD Your chapters are starting to feel shorter and shorter (but that's a good thing, believe me, it means I'm reading through them faster). Just as I'm getting really into the story and flying through it...it's over! :gonk: I'm really glad to see an update though, and I enjoyed it! *taunts* Ramian's feeling jealous...Ramian's feeling jealous...xD Kiss off the smirk gosh darnit! Show that slut who's boss! >_< ^^;

Seriously though, I learned a bit more about Ramian's past...and that was nice. It's great to know more who he is...why he's so reluctant and all that. By the end though...I hope he does something to actually get the elf's attention. Make Shade think. If Ramian falls in love with Shade...then the darn elf could just go off and break his heart, but if Ramian does something (or a couple somethings) and Shade ends up falling for him first....it sounds like a much safer course of action. Of course, the elf would deny any real feeling at first...but in the end. *nod nod*

Anyway. In short, I liked it, please write more, I'll be waiting for your next update! ^_^

-Moonstar

Victory! Sorry it took a bit to review...so many people are putting new stories up and stuff and it took me a bit to even realize you'd actually updated...so fast! I'm loving it so far...the tease was wonderful/horrible, depending on the way you look at it. You really had me thinking they'd go at it then and there...I was surprised...but convinced. Sheesh...Ramian sure took awhile to get his wits about him...(might have been nice if he never had but...*sigh*...oh well, I do understand his convictions).

Emma's a slut! o_o Gosh...I mean I know Shade's sexy and all but whoa...definitely a slut. Grrrr...back off the elf...he belongs to the bounty hunter! Now I'm just wondering what'll happen next...Ramian will stop him won't he? Right? Get caught? Or maybe he won't...and then there will just be more sexual tension...and...and...gah! At least they'll have horses now. That'll be cool. ^_^ I like horses...not to mention they'll be able to move faster.

As always, looking forward to your update! And thanks for the recognition, I'm glad you appreciate my feedback! I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!

-Moonstar

HI, I really like your characters, they have something to say and that's nice. I mean that they are not 2Dimensional. So far your story is very interesting. Don't give up! And thank you for updating so fast. I hope to read you soon again.

O_O You can't leave me there! *dramatic denial* Nooooooo!! *cough* T_T Anyway...yes...I love the chapter! ^_^ (For understandable reasons...and because I really think your writing is improving). Your sentences are flowing better, everything goes from one thing to the next well and it makes sense. Whenever I read, I always pause over things that don't make sense and ideas that don't fit together quite right...but I went almost straight through this chapter. Good job. Saturday or sooner? I hope for sooner! I'm looking forward to more as always, keep up the good work!

-Moonstar

An update! Just in time for Christmas too, great job! Personally, I enjoy the slower pace you're taking with their relationship. When I write, I find it very hard not to have at least some plot behind it all, and you're doing a very good job. I like how they're slowly getting closer though, and now Ramian's finally giving the elf a chance to explain himself. Go Shade for saving him! ^_^ A life debt is always a great ice-breaker to say the least.

I'd just like to say I'm still enjoying your writing (though the fact that you write in present tense is...not exactly main-stream, just a little confusing) and I look forward enthusiastically to your next installment. Keep up the good work! I hope to see an update soon.

Merry Christmas,
~Moonstar~

oh i want more now but i understand.

Yay! An update! Lovely. In the flashback, you did a good job of describing the mage, especially when he was drunk. I got a real clear image, no holes. The kiss at the end was awesome and hot, plus...a great way to get the man's attention, right? *chuckle* Keep up the good work. Cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^

-Moonstar

I just started reading this and i really like it. You guys are doing a great job with giving the characters depth. Please keep it coming.