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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Good characters, a good orgy, and decent writing. Other than working on your spelling and grammar (for instance, quotations usually end in a comma instead of a period), I would say keep doing what you're doing, and make sure to give us plenty more club activity. :p
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great piece of work. Love the interaction between the characters and your pacing is excellent. Great orgy but you should step it up a bit. Can't wait for the rest. Keep 'em cuming...
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was bloody brilliant. yes please i want to know what happened to lauren you mentioned that twice in the story and you never told us about it. great detail. please keep on writing.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue please
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNIIIISSSSSHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! i wanna know what beth does!!!!!!! PLEASY PLEASY PLEASY FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff, please continue.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter 4
Might as well review again since you deserve it lol. Well like I said awsome chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next with them, what the regular meetings are like and also what happens when a guy joins up to see how the girls get the better deal.
Might as well review again since you deserve it lol. Well like I said awsome chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next with them, what the regular meetings are like and also what happens when a guy joins up to see how the girls get the better deal.
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck? has wnyone just noticed this. Story lost a chapter 2k on shit
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, continue! VERY intriguing. xoxo
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't post buildup...get some actual content!