rate_review Reviews

I'm sorry, I didn't read your story yet, but I'm just letting people know that when they use all those warnings, you can't read them without scrolling the page sideways. It would be nice to just have the major ones and the rest inside so you can check pages without going back and forth. Thank you for not minding me writing this. I wish the site would fix it, but they don't so only the authors can.

Really good job on this. I have to say that this is one of the best stories that I've ever read on AFF. Its really amazing. The descriptions, people, realms, and just every creative aspect. I cant wait too see how she has changed. The story flows very well. keep it up!!

meadow

Awesome I'm so glad to see your still working on this.

This was an excilent short story. It had me guessin what he was untill the instant of revelation. It is cool how the plot twisted to where Jacob was in side himself and rally didn't want to do what he was to the girl. How ever I believe some things could have been saved till later. But all in all it was a great story. Why so short though? Is it a series type story, or was it because it is still a work in progress? What ever the case may be, I would love to get to read the rest when it comes out.

Keep it comming. This is a really good story. I want to find out what is going on now.. Evil cliffhangers!