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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dondon , like your story alot but there is some mistakes that i hope u correct but they are really few , and another thing make the chapters longer and more conversations in it .
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I like the beginning. Please update again soon.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, oh please let them have a conversation so that we can figure some stuff out! I really like this story, it has so much potential. PLEASE update soon and often!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey gr8 chapter but try to make them alittle longer the next time , but keep up the hard work .
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like your new story. It is really well writen and I would love to read more of it. Please update soon. Keep the stories coming. You are really good.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i know dondon that u understand my new nickame , gr8 till now keep up thehard work it's getting really good and plz update soon
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, my interest is peaked hella high. I'm dying to know what happened in her past and exactly what type of person Shane really is.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thia seems like a bitch
she is rude to her employee--Dana
she has lost her memory, and the one person who seems to know her from before--Shane--she tries to ignore?!
i dont know; i wanna like this story, but it has too many holes in it
she is rude to her employee--Dana
she has lost her memory, and the one person who seems to know her from before--Shane--she tries to ignore?!
i dont know; i wanna like this story, but it has too many holes in it
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start. waiting for more.