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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! they did it! very nice chapter.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter !!!!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude totally keep writing its a great story!!! Update soon i wanna know what happens and i cant wait!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, dammit, dammit...you can't just stop all of sudden. I need more, I'm blaming you for this addiction. You know I can't blame myself it's not my fault. I love this story. I want to know what happens next. Was Mat the one in her nightmares? What happened to her? Update ASAP!!!!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohhhhhh whats goin on...is he bad i thinnk he is lol well hope to read more.........btw i havent written cuz my computer is broke im on my friends now ttyl
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz update really soooooon , i begining to get everything and to guess what happened and i think i might be right so plz update and keep up the good work
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 12) ??!! what is up with punker? I like your story. I liked your last story too. In my opinion (which really isnt worth that much) I think that you could improve, and you are! I read your last story and I think that you are improving. (I would also like to thank you for revising your last story, it makes it easier to read). I like your stories which is why I read them. I want to read more of your stories. Please keep at it. Update soon.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay she remembered a it,,,,,,,,,got a lil lost but its ok keep writin
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please continue, PLEASE?
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a good idea for a story. And I am enjoying it alot (I am up to chapter 8) there are some spelling/grammar mistakes. A few places you have dead instead of died. I also think in chapter 8 the doctor would speak more formally and be grammatically correct. I think the story is going well. I cant wait to read more.