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for School Boys: On the Bus

by kasin

person night
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo wrong but....great writing. Hope you will bring us more soon!
person unknown
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! great story. you should write a second chapter!
person cannibisdeath
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad not bad. plz write another chapter about them and another girl in another akward place.
person marie erins
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really well written. nice job