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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey an update!? I had almost given up on this story!
Great story, but it seems that you had gotten a bit sick of it, because the ending was a lot more simple then the overall story. I think you had to many things happening at once in this chapter, as if you just wanted to mark the story with a "complete"...
But overall? Still a great story, and i hope to see more from you!
Great story, but it seems that you had gotten a bit sick of it, because the ending was a lot more simple then the overall story. I think you had to many things happening at once in this chapter, as if you just wanted to mark the story with a "complete"...
But overall? Still a great story, and i hope to see more from you!
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's about time. I'm glad to see an update, but I didn't think it would be the end. Speaking of which, it seem a bit rushed and like the war a little anti-climatic. I could not believe who saved her and the baby. I knew there had to be a reason for her scars. Oh, and nice way to explain the way he just ignored her and didn't visit. However, if I were her I would have made him suffer a bit. I mean he didn't even check on her for a year. In any case, it was a happy ending and I thank you for that at least.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a depressing chapter. I really did not expect the war to end so quickly and, yes, it was anti-climacticv. Please, tell me Vicdean is not that shallow and there has to be a reason why Amaram didn't heal. And Lex actually got married??!! I can't beleive this, if she wasn't going to end up with Vicdean, then she at least end up with Lex. Please tell me I did not waste my time reading and wanting for update and a Great Story with a - BAD / SAD / DEPRESSING / DISAPPOINTING - ENDING. The last time I read a great story with a bad ending I was so heart borken that I never and still haven't read anything the author has written since. You are a really good writer, PLEASE be good now.
I do have hope, with the surpise ending.
I do have hope, with the surpise ending.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, it is not over yet... take it easy.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally! An Update! It takes forever! I mean that I'm waiting it very much and so the other. I guess. Anyway, Good story Great Author. Good luck
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, had me on the edge of my sit from the start. I have to say I'm surprised to see who she ended up with so soon. But I'm not complainning. Please up date soon, thanks.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good story ! I like it a lot ! Can't wait for the next chapter...
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story! i would love to read more. please update soon.
Ja-Ne =^_^=
Ja-Ne =^_^=
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It has been a while! I thought that it was stopped. Sorry. But, just have in your mind that you have one faithfull fans waiting for your next update. Good luck.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really Liking the story.Wish you'd Update soon.