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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, just wow... that was... was damn hot! Yay, I was so happy when I saw that you had updated, this chapter was definetely worth the wait!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*wipes brow* what MOOD where you in!.....had to take a sec before I reviewed....you know to wipe the drool away etc......Glad you decided to keep the story going.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
noooo please dont stop this story! its fantastic and the scenes are well written and everythign!
as to vote well im too young to vote legally but you have my thumbs up!
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as to vote well im too young to vote legally but you have my thumbs up!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE !!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG YOU ..... WRITE MORE CHAPTERS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WILL BE YOUR ETERNAL SLAVE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU WILL JUST PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE !!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG YOU ..... WRITE MORE CHAPTERS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WILL BE YOUR ETERNAL SLAVE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU WILL JUST PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...cool story. I'd like to see you continue it, you have a nice and easy to read style. And the plot is not only beleivable but it is enticing.
~Boy on a Leash
~Boy on a Leash
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sry i haven't reviewed ur story ^^; well i am gonna review to say i love ur story. Its like a drug :P. well if u r gonna be continuing ur story in the future i wouldn't mind waiting.. r u gonna continue... i forgot well i'll check later.. Ok so i hope u can update or finish ur story some other time ^^
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I trembled and could not find my voice to answer" WOOOHOOO me and you both brother *fans self* trite and intellectual my ass! Rorasama gives it 4 stars...i*takes out mop and cleans up cheery juice".........
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was really good! I have never really read a story with incest before...hm...Well actually I have, but I mean the kind in witch they both sort of love each others, or both want each others, but I did like this one very much! Didn`t bother me at all, as I thought that it would. Hm...I wonder am I making any sense at all...oh well...
You are a very good writer, that scene in the bedroom was hot! =) Well anyways, I hope that you update soon!
You are a very good writer, that scene in the bedroom was hot! =) Well anyways, I hope that you update soon!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, cold showers are needed...damn you talented, in writing stories I mean *LOL*. I think things are starting to look better for Sean, even if the good thing is his own brother. Derek is a dick, don't like him. Victor, when I think of him, he reminds me of a shy foreign-exchange student with creepy habitats. *hahaha* Me and my imagination, two peas in a pod. (^_^) Update soon, can wait for what happens next...
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*record screeches and stops* wow that kinda took me by surprise....love surprises BTW