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for Inherited desire

by Kanzia

schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH man why did you have to go and end it right there it was really getting good though nothing had gone on yet. I like the way its falling out so far update soon please.
person Kori Nibiki
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! This is great! Please, you MUST continue with your story. ONEGAISHIMASU!
person Nat
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep on going, it should go really well.
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please give me more!

I can\'t stand not knowing what\'ll happen! Your such a great writer!
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT IS :P~!
person keyonnamc
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say Ohm\'s father was a sick preverted bastard. I must say I have the same feels as Ohm does for his late father. I have only one question what happens now? Update real soon, please!!!!
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person Jace
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I like it. It\'s very cool so far. I hope you continue soon.
person Shadow
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot and I\'m very curious as to how it goes on. Please keep writing.
person jenn
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'d like to read more
person supergirlanna
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh!!! great start! love the characters! i\'m really enjoying the idea of Uni... can\'t wait to see what happens next! update soon?