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I like it. It sounds like a good start. Kept me interested.

An interesting start to this fic. I hope you continue it, i want to find out more about each of the characters. Cheers and i hope the words flow easily for you.

I'm really excited about reading more of this story. I love reading about two opposties who attract. After reading Original Sin,the first I read by you, I was able to see what a great writer you are. Keep up the great work.

Reviewing chapter 1, both characters seem to be different in personality and how they view life so it would be interesting to see how they meet. Good start and thanks for starting another story.

Im a reader and i love it . I mean it is great and its only the first chapter. Its so real and so um i dont got the words but is so. I cant wait until u write more. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think t is a great start to another fantastic story. Please keep writing:)

Hey this is pretty good i mean i think you should finish the story about sarah and Zip first but this is a good story too for this story i think you should have them hate each other and bump into each other on occasion but then have him move out cause he i guess doesn;t like his roommates so he gets a two bedroom appartment and no Terry is getting kicked out of her appartment so she moves in with him cause that is the only thing she can afford ....anyway you know something like that if not i know you will come up with something that is really good you always do ..thank you for writing so well toodles for now

Oh gosh and darn. I thought you were going to write a story about Ava, to be honest. The way you kind of ended Sarah and Zip's story about Ava kinda made me think you were gonna continue with that storyline about poor little Ava. Oh well, can't hope too much. It was good, seemed a little like good vs. evil if that makes sense. Cookies!

I like the way this is starting out. I think it was a good idea for you to write this. I like how you got them to meet but not really \"meet\". Now I just wonder how they will meet again, maybe her friends Giovanni and Sal? I\'m probably not right, but oh well, it\'s fun to try to guess!

Rosemary

P.S. What about Even Angels Fall? I thought that was a great story! I hope you finish it when you get the time!

Oooo... I like, I like... Have you ever seen the movie, Serendipity? The premise of this story kinda reminds me of that. Very interesting and unique. Anyway, I love Theresa\'s character so far. She seems like the epitome of a nice, girl-next-door type of person. I also liked how she played along with the homeless man at the bus stop. I wonder if maybe he\'ll come back in to play later on in the story...? Alrighty, nice start and, as always, I look forward to seeing more. ^__^