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can't wait for more! please update soon. :) and good luck with the wedding planning/preparations!

Good start so far. I like the Theresa character, especially her job as a personal assistant. I'm interested to see how you are going to get him into the apartment next to her though.

P.S. Good luck with the wedding planning. I hope you don't tear each other to shreads...and all that happy stuff. Congrats!

Thanks for coming back to continue this story. Good luck with work and planning your wedding. I think it is cool that you and two other writers are gonna make a website so good luck with that also. So definitely keep us up to date with that. I believe that every story is cliched some way or another so it doesn\'t bother me but if it bothers you than all I\'ll say is that I believe in your abilities as an author and you\'ll have Tirch\'s creative signature all over it. Okay, back to actually reviewing chapter 2, I like Gio\'s character because he had me laughing since he showed up in the story. I can totally relate to Jack\'s roommate problems. Communal living is such a pain in the ass. I feel sorry for Jack because of his situation with his dad and not having any of his family to support him, but I think he did the right thing he shouldn\'t look back but move forward. Thanks for updating:)

Yay.. With the site going haywire for so long and not knowing how long it would take to get back on track, I\'m so glad you\'re back. Alive, kicking... and getting MARRIED?! How exciting! And you\'re also creating a site? (Coincidentally, I could\'ve have sworn Eon mentioned something of the sorts.) My, you have your plate full. Well congrats and best wishes to all your endeavors!

As for the story, I\'m glad you updated this one. Between the two stories you started, I\'m more drawn to this one. I guess it\'s because I have a feeling that it\'s gonna get really ansty and I don\'t do angst to well. lolz.. well... whatever the case.. Glad to see you back and this story is great so far. I loved reading about Jack\'s little fixation with Theresa everytime he sees her. It\'s kinda weird-funny in a cute way.

Whoops, I meant to say that THE OTHER story might get to angst-y. hehe.. too much coffee in the morning gets me wired.

Great job.. Been a while since you\'ve written (not that this site has been working the best to even be able to post to). I don\'t care if it is cliche, but it is good and I can\'t wait to read it all.

Hopefully you will have time to post a bit more, but anyways, good luck with the wedding.

I am so glad to see you started a new story. I always get excited when you do, and of course I love them all. I am sure this one will be no different.......

Patiently waiting!
Memory Chase

Oooh, wedding planning :] How exciting! And what\'s this you say about a website? Excited much? Oui oui :]
So...I\'m already hooked with this story. I find Jack very endearing and even though it is a bit of a cliche, I find that very...comforting? I happen to love cliches, for example, I would\'ve been absolutely distraught if Hugh Grant didn\'t end up with Sandra Bullock at the end of Two Weeks Notice (even though we all knew it was coming.) Am I making sense? Probably not...the main point I\'m making here is, even if it may be a little bit of a cliche at the moment, I have full faith in you as a writer. I know you\'re going to have us all gasping and perching uncomfortably on the edges of our seats as this story progresses :] I can\'t wait.

Great Start!! Love it!

Different line from the others-- your characters our out of high school, college and are working people. Looking forward to a longer story of this-- teaser?!