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by Cannibisdeath

person some punk kid
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahahaha that made me laugh

"Her tounge licked around it swearling around licking in and out heis pee-hole."

that was the single funniest line i have ever read in a fan fic.

also, the mention of a PantarA shirt makes me think that, perhaps, Rudy is you, because most teenaged boys do fantasize about older chicks. i know i did when i was your age.

i think that you should have Rudy fall in love with Cole.
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going I liked it