rate_review Reviews

I've read this one like three or four times, already. It's just that juicy! XD. Add to it! But it's good on it's own like that too. *confused now* Don't care...add to it! ^.^

Damn, you are one sick puppy! You can really, really write cause it is realy hard to write like that.

Wow.... simply wow....

Great piece. I could feel his emotions like they were mine. For a while I almost became that character. Doesn\'t it sound weird? Well, for me it only means that I could forget it\'s a fiction. And that\'s the best an author can do to me. I really love your style and I\'m glad you wrote something new, but that doesn\'t mean I\'m not waiting for another chapter of RAHO ;) Or another oneshot, like this. It doesn\'t matter, as long as it\'s so well written. Yours TBR

This is interesting; I like it. But I think I need to stop reading so much anime if I immediately think \'Sanzo!\' everytime I see the word master, lol. This reminds me of him in an AU, for some reason.

Pls Update soon. That was very gd.

Holy crap girl! I love your writing you know this but damn.... That was wonderfully written. I felt like I was drawn directly into the character\'s mind and I even felt seduced by his desires. This is really powerful and well consuming. I honestly can\'t form anything else to praise the beauty of what you have created.

~Luna

Very insightful and very well-worked. It\'s written so as to imply pain, but the feeling of pleasure completely suffuses through the whole piece making it hot. The voice sounds truly like an intense submissive and unlike most stories that deal with extreme submissiveness, the enjoyment of the submissive comes across very clearly in the piece making it read like pleasure.
Personally I liked it, I felt the pain with the guy and actually understood his enjoyment rather than \"Why the hell?\". I also found it quite sexy in its reading, with the tone of milder erotica but with hardcore words.
I liked the anonymity of it with the subtext \"This could be anyone\" and that subtext applied to every character within the piece. Curiously, this anonymity made it quite personal.
I also liked the swapping of \'control\' of the piece, the irony that the submissive has the most control when he is submissive and loses control when he is no longer required to be a submissive.
I would be interested to know what a publisher would think of it, I think it\'s worth paper-space and you know I always look forward to your stuff.