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for A Brother's Love

by JadenBlueBoy

person Anon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uwaaa your so mean to lucious ::crys::()(><)() but i still love the fic~!!! its nice and original , that hard to find. keep it up. ()(^.~)()
person Rain
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is the first original fiction I've read in ages, and I must say, I love this story. I don't usually have the stomach for really deppressing ones -sniffs- but this is good x) So please update soon.
person bambi4real
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm upset. that was just cruel to have the poor boy raped repeatedly. I must admit I must be a romantic because I held out hope that blame would get to him before anything happened and that maybe those guys were actually going to be good guys...oh gosh you just have to write the next ch to make luc alright! please!
person Jelly Belly
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you know this but it's prostate not prostrate
Prostrate means to lay flat, usually on the stomache and unmoving.
Just thought you ought to know since so many authors make this mistake ;)
person cynlie
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohhhh please let blame kill all the dumbass fuckers and save lucious even tho blame's a pretty evil character...update really soon! and you might want to spellcheck cuz some of your words are confusing ^^ thank you so much for writing!!!
person PyTerato
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well now, There are a few things I\'d like to know, like What are those healing powers from, and how did all this ... hot man sexin\' begin? lol I can\'t wait for the chapters to come. Good job.

~C~
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wickedly sensual. I LOVED IT. i can\'t wait to read the story behind that little piece of smut:-). it already has hints of an exciting and entertaining story.
person Cindyip
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s a interesting way of version of brotherly love, can\'t wait to see the rest^_^;;