rate_review Reviews

I liked your story. However for future stories be aware that you dont have to have sloppy scenes in order for the audience to know what your charcters are thinking about each other, your talented enough as a writer to express that without the whole sickly love scene in the middle that didn't really make any sense. There was really no need for it. You had already made both their feelings clear without the scene that just confused and made the plot kind of silly, hence the fact going any further seemed kind of futile. Thats what I think anyway. If its not how it was intended sorry.

Hey, i like you!! i like this story, which means i like you. You totally rock, you better continue, or i will hunt you down. 0_0 like seriously though, i will!! i swear it!! please update soon, bye!

shit man :D you're funny. The other chapter was sadistically amusing and i just love it...would i be put in a psych ward for liking this type of stuff ^__^? anyways UPDATE SOON but feel better...meh i guess you can't do both? and lucious is awesome :) *huggle* YAY! thank you and get well soon or else *gives you a warm blankie and heater, then some medicine* DONT STOP O_O...

lol i had sincerely hoped that yolu wouldn't ruin such a great story with such a sappy end. I personally love blame warts and all I think he's really real and unapologetic about his deranged desires. it is a great story and I look forward to part two.

you of course realize you posted the same ch twice right? Anyway the ch itself was canon and as such was right on. I thought that the violence though seemed out of left field we aren't given any warning that it's coming or what is provoking it. Perhaps you had it leap forward in time from the last ch but the reader isn't aware of that so it is a bit confusing. I am looking forward to the next ch. keep um coming.

you of course realize you posted the same ch twice right? Anyway the ch itself was canon and as such was right on. I thought that the violence though seemed out of left field we aren't given any warning that it's coming or what is provoking it. Perhaps you had it leap forward in time from the last ch but the reader isn't aware of that so it is a bit confusing. I am looking forward to the next ch. keep um coming.

please PLEASE don't make lucious into a hardcore sex wanting little puppy, or else i shall strongly dislike you -_- (hate is too bad a word ^^) ok ok i know it's an angst story and all that shit? but lucious is too adorably innocent to be...a toy in blame's sexual preferences (HAHA did i just say that?) anyways GREAT STORY keep going or i will slap you :]

I must say that this last chapter was very disappointing to me. It was like you did a 180 on the story line and the character's personality. It didn't even seem like it was the same character or story line anymore. It's great about the love and acceptance theme, but the total reversal and change was too abrupt. Thanks for sharing your story and that was my two cents.

nice chapter!!!! blame coming to his rescue.. i like them both together. blame loves his luscious possessively neh?

i'm amazed...hah...how a dark and horrific story like this, oh yeah it's also very disturbing and interesting, but it can make me love it so much :) how old is lucious? and how old is blame? more detail would be good, but this story is great as far as i can tell ^_^

thank you so much!!! waeee i love you! *huggle* and damn all the horny bastards in the world -_-