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That's fine, I'm just glad you updated!! I was starting to get worried, but another solid chapter.

Wow! This is a really great story, a little confusing at first regarding the fliers and how exactly this ship works (and I read sci-fi), but eventually I figured it out. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story, but I was wondering if maybe you thought about putting it in the sci-fi section? You might get more hits that way. Anyway, I hope you post more soon!

Hey, sorry I haven't replied to your email. I was busy when I read it and only had the time to file away in my head that I had to reply and/or read your stuff. I haven't clicked any of the links you sent me yet, but I will, I promise. I'm getting worried about this Haven kid. He's rather strange, which, of course, you've had many of your characters say already. But strange isn't necessarily bad. Only Haven's kind is. At any rate, I simply can't wait to find out what exactly Hal found out about Alex.

Do continue as soon as you can.

Pen.

You really drew me in with this one. It\'s extremely well-done and for a layperson like me it seems extremely well-researched. Do continue, please. ^_^