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for Malicious Dreams

by SeanKen

person Torne
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How very sad, I feel I can relate to Brennan, my father too passed away when I was only fourteen, and I can understand the inner conflicts he is experiancing. Well done on the details, I love how you took the time to give everything its due attention, even down to the \"light apricot pink\" house. I do hope more people review this story. It amazes me that so many people can reveiw such poorly written work and simply look over everything else, esp. those posted in the original sections. Oh well, in short, I loved your story and I hope you continue it, it would be a shame not to.

~Love Torne