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Ah! What happened to the last chapter? I know I read it this morning! (Didn't have time to review, had to leave...but I planned to review just now...and now I can't find it?! :gonk:) o_o

Interesting. Now i'm understanding the prophecy better. Good job and please update again soon.

It's so nice to see you're back! (Sorry I didn't put this in the first one...I'm a bit panicked for my chapters! :gonk:) I couldn't be happier to see you here again though. ^_^ And with you you bring an update, joy! Pepper's gonna be gone...but I suppose being reborn is a good thing...I've wanted Marzi back to just himself for a bit now, I mean how is anyone supposed to get back into any sort of proper relationship when you're sharing your body half-time with someone completely different? Ah well.

It's awesome how well you got the prophecy to fit...she really is mother, sister, and daughter...all at once. Did you plan the whole thing from the very beginning? I guess you must have...it's awesome. (Sorry for lousy review...I'm confused!) More than one has lost a lot of work...

(Just read your review.) Yes! I had fourteen! Fourteen! *cry* It wouldn't be all that frustrating...if I hadn't lost corrections...(yeah, stupid right? I correct some last minute things right before I post...:gonk:). Plus...I had over fifty reviews...and I know it's a vanity thing...but loosing them all is very de-glorifying (probably not a word)! *paces in heavy frustration* *thunks head to desk* I just hope they fix it...^^'

I can't believe I lost a review and 2 chapters... It's depressing... But it's good I've saved them both somewhere else... So I should have it all back!

It seems the Prophecy is getting ready to come true... but what does it mean? And what is the connection between it and the 'Agent' of God? There has to be one... And I love how you keep the suspense high! It's got me begging for more!

I'm glad to see your back too. Keep up the good work!

i have read this whole series and i thought that it was very imaginative and a very rewarding read i have enjoyed it emensly it is one of the more origional stories i have come across and i have read alot of them lol not all but alot. brenda

Good job! You make Kyle stay the same from the last story, the awaiting lover hoping to be reunited with his true love. I love the fact how you protray Kyle actually \'praying\'. It\'s the ultimate sign of true love, when one does something out of the ordinary for another, which in this case is a half-demon praying.

I also like how Kyle feels that hint of jealously when he thinks Marzi is kissing Nicholas. It still falls true that Kyle believes that only he is worth even touching Marzi. True sense of dominance there.

All in all, continued greatness from the writer. I can\'t wait to see what Kyle will try to pul against the agent of God.

And have a happy anniversary!

I\'m laughing so hard at Kale\'s reaction. I laughed even more at Marzi\'s statement he was 7 months pregnant. Oh man, this story just makes me laugh almost everytime i read it. Thats a good thing. Congrats on your ten year anniversary and i hope you have fun. I\'m hoping there will be an expanation for God\'s agent instead of the angel. Pleasae update soon and awesome job on this chapter.

I love Gummy Bears!

Have a wonderful time on vacation! Excellent story. Ah, Kale was jealous just for a little while, but he got over it. :)

Squee, I was right. :D This chapter makes me happy. All the love. ^^ Please update soon!