rate_review Reviews

Sooo pretty. :D I love all your descriptions, they're absolutely perfect. Cassie's cool, I hope she gets a bigger part. And of course... I love Kale! <3 I always smile when he shows up in a chapter, 'cause that's the sort of fangirl I am.

Happy holidays!

I think I really like Kale now. This was a great chapter with all the tension and conflict. Eagerly anticipating future posts when you get back from visiting your family. Happy Holidays!

Kale's getting pushed to the limits huh? And it looks like Nicholas is biting off more then he realizes with that vampire. Of course, just get her near him and have Pepper in the same room with a rather blunt object close by... That would make some interesting reading! Marzi wasn't mentioned much in the chapter, but I'm sure that Kale versus the Agent was needed more to the plot.

It's like fighters all right up at each other, all holding weapons, waiting. The first one to blink, dies. It's great!

Snidne, out.

Poor Kale. being threatened is not fun. Wow. They certainly have gotten themselves into something, well, they havent' really done anything but...oh nevermind, i'm rambling. Awesome chapter. It made me laugh. i can't wait for the next one.

hm, you're right that was short. Nevertheless, it was quite a nice tidbit. I especially like the last paragraph where Kale carries his rage. It was almost poetic...very eloquent

by the way, it looks as if my last review before this one disappeared into neverland. Can't recall what I said in it, but I do remember reviewing it. I didn't forget about you! I lost 2 reviews and one chapter of my own last week, and I'm sure I reviewed a couple other stories as well. Who knows what happened to them? WAH!

Short and sweet, very nice touch. I like how Kale and Nicholas fight over the sole body. Kale's anger issues may just be downfall of him yet... And Pepper telling off the two seemed like a nice touch to add in as well.

You keep up your good work, and I'll keep up mine. Snidne, out.

Ah! The insanity! o_o Poor Kale, and Marzi...and...well, all of them. I just can't imagine how confusing it must be. Oh, I can't explain how much I just want Marzi and Kale together again...safely and normally...but then of course there's no story right? ^_^;

Again, it's written wonderfully, even if it's short! The fight between Kale and Nicholas made an impression. They're fighting over one body...but two different people, and...and...gah! I can't wait for the next chapter! And the baby to be born. o_O Is that not gonna happen till right at the end? Or are you gonna like sum up those next few months and then put forth the drama afterwards? I suppose, since this is the last one...you've got a lot to go through! I look forward to it! Please, post more soon. ^_^

-Moonstar

Excellent chapter, as usual, and I loved the fight scene that leads to Pepper telling Kale and Nicholas to behave. And such a powerful ending to the chapter. As always I'm looking forward to your next posting. Thank you!

Heheh. I forgot to review this after I'd read it. ^^() You have such talent for foreshadowing! You made me go, "Oh, that's what's gonna happen!" right before it actually did happen, without it getting all redundant or overly obvious. :3