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AHHH!!!! You stopped it there?!? What happens next? Now you have me all anxious. That just proves that you're doing a great job. But please hurry and update soon!

Whoo! Awesome, awesome! I'm determind to give you a legible review this time...so I'm going in chronological order. First, when Nicholas was talking to Sylvia about his 'cravings' "Nicholas’s mind jumped back to the third month of Marzi’s pregnancy, when Marzi had refused to eat anything but microwave popcorn for nearly a week." That made me laugh out loud so bad...I think I disturbed anyone within earshot. T_T ^^;

The movie scene with Kale and Marzi was neat...and then when Marzi started getting his fidgetting...the way you described Kale's reaction....that was so awesome. So perfectly in character...that he'd force his voice calm...and then dash into a run the instant Marzi couldn't see. ^^

When Kale broke the dresser...yay! I couldn't help but think of Nicholas in a skirt though...xD And then...and then...the baby. o_o I don't think I could ever write a c-section thing. :gonk: I squirm to much....all...bloody. T_T But you wrote it...and it made sense...and it worked...and the part with Kale (yes, there are a million parts I love with Kale...I think I just love Kale period actually. xD)....when Marzi was trying to remind him of the promise...but knew even if he could talk it wouldn't make a difference. All so great. You're just a terrific author...and your stuff never ceases to amaze me. I look forward to more! Baby! And finally...Marzi's just himself. o_o

But then there's still Nicholas all alone...and God's agent...and the baby actually THERE...that'll certaily change some things and...well. There's certainly a lot ahead. I can't wait! Update soon please! ^_^

-Moonstar

Ahhh yes, that damned tugging. Makes you wonder if the Doctor is screwing up and pulling your intestines out. Yay, C-sections. This chapter certainly brought back memories; and since I'm due for another section in one month, I guess it's good to remember. Ppphhht. Lol. Anyway, good as always. Thanks much. (Though I feel bad that Pepper didn't get a real good-bye.)

Alisha

You had me crying one paragraph and laughing the next. I don't think that Nicholas has had so much to say since he was struck dumb as he has had to say in this chapter, even though he wrote it. Nice touch about the pants! lol. Sylvia still remains a mystery. Enjoyed the birthing process, brought back some memories. (except for the scalpel bit). Thanks, Falc

Nooo! I just discovered that you wrote the third part to the story and you end it there?!!!!! (Shriek!) No you have to update quickly that is just too brutal I love the Moulin Rouge comment that is exactly how I felt watching it too. Some parts of this ch definately had me laughing out loud which wouldn't be a bad thing except i was in the law library at the time....

I'm never disappointed with your updates. And as always, I'm waiting to find out what happens next. So glad that you post consistently, or I'd go crazy. ;)

Thanks.

Another fabulous chapter, thanks! (P.S. I'm glad he's not a vampire after all, that would have just been too weird, Lol.)

Yay! Another update! I hope Nicholas is fine now. this was really good, please update again soon! I can't wait for more.

"I don’t believe in good news. Just tell me everything.” You create memorable characters. I can't tell whether to be afraid of him or laugh. Kind of like my father, except for the demonic attributes. I really liked Nicholas' dream sequence, and I'm glad that Pepper isn't as faded as I thought she would be by now. I await your update with bated breath.