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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My God, you are such a sweetie! I especially had something in my eye for the thief challenge, and of course, couldn\'t help but make somekind of happy noise when \"crime bosses don\'t bake christmas cookies\" Darn, I am unhappy more than ever that the trilogy is ended. These glimpses are absolutely lushious and leave me hungry for more (I am a glutton you know, feel free to slap my wrist at any time). The link to the pics was a great Idea. I kind of envisioned them all like that, except Kale being older and broader and Marzi being taller. (for some odd reason, I had this picture in my mind that he had bleach-blonde spikey hair...) Yeah, yeah, I know you can\'t really tell how tall they are from the pics, but meh...) I eagerly await your next work of imagination.
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. And I mean wow. As always, your writing amazes me. Not only did the ending keep my heart racing with every breath-taking feat and near-death experience each of the characters went through, but I loved all those extra tidbits at the end (deleted scenes?). Yeah. I especially enjoyed the one with Kale and the cookies...and then the one with Nicholas and Marzi. Both just lovely.
Kale\'s words with Nicholas when he\'s trying to commit suicide really touched me, and the way he finally convinced him...you\'re brilliant, really. What better way to prove that deep down he\'s not evil and still has a chance? Just the fact that he sacrificed his humanity to save Lolli...but yeah. He would be the kind to not trust himself enough to not be evil...until getting some true proof like that. I loved it all.
And I can\'t remember whether the end bit with Lolli older...and the hill with the castle, treasure and pirates was in the add-ons or story...I think it was epilogue? Anyway...that was awesome too. Marzi and his oral fixation...xD I can\'t wait to see more from you! Or...you mentioned a site that\'s gonna pay you now to write...does that mean you won\'t be posting more on here? ^^; Please don\'t say that...I swear. You totally, totally deserve it...and I\'m not the least bit surprised that you got selected for something like that...but I don\'t want to loose your terrific writing!
Anyway, keep at it and nice to see you back! Adios.
-Moonstar
Kale\'s words with Nicholas when he\'s trying to commit suicide really touched me, and the way he finally convinced him...you\'re brilliant, really. What better way to prove that deep down he\'s not evil and still has a chance? Just the fact that he sacrificed his humanity to save Lolli...but yeah. He would be the kind to not trust himself enough to not be evil...until getting some true proof like that. I loved it all.
And I can\'t remember whether the end bit with Lolli older...and the hill with the castle, treasure and pirates was in the add-ons or story...I think it was epilogue? Anyway...that was awesome too. Marzi and his oral fixation...xD I can\'t wait to see more from you! Or...you mentioned a site that\'s gonna pay you now to write...does that mean you won\'t be posting more on here? ^^; Please don\'t say that...I swear. You totally, totally deserve it...and I\'m not the least bit surprised that you got selected for something like that...but I don\'t want to loose your terrific writing!
Anyway, keep at it and nice to see you back! Adios.
-Moonstar
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March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! It\'s a shame Nicholas had to drink the tainted blood, but it\'s still absolutely wonderful! It\'s a shame to see something this good end, but I like to believe that appearences aren\'t always real... That in fact, they may hide something much much deeper...
Anyway, I\'m glad to see you again, and I hope you see YOU again commenting my works. I\'ve been in such a writing slump since this place went down... But I feel ready to write again! Hurrah! Falcon! Come on, we have stories to write and people to convince reading them!
Snidne, out.
Anyway, I\'m glad to see you again, and I hope you see YOU again commenting my works. I\'ve been in such a writing slump since this place went down... But I feel ready to write again! Hurrah! Falcon! Come on, we have stories to write and people to convince reading them!
Snidne, out.
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How I hate to see it end. I'm enjoying your story so much and I hope that you will start another trilogy about this unusual family you've created. I'm a Sylvia and Nicholas shipper now - please give me more of them. ;) Thanks for posting.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Final Confrontation! Definately a clash of titans... It's good that Kyle and the others aren't going down without a fight... cause what kind of chapter would it be without some big fight!? Look out, cause the final force for the child is coming!
By the way, I liked the name you gave the baby. Lolli...
Snidne, out!
By the way, I liked the name you gave the baby. Lolli...
Snidne, out!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter??? You can't be serious! How are you gonna end it all in only one more chap?? That caught me completely off-guard. I was expecting...I don't know...but a lot more on this thing...I can't believe it's almost over! Well...I'm sure if you're gonna end it then you've got a plan...it just seems so...sudden! Anyway...off the rant and onto the chapter.
Lollipop! xD That made me laugh. It just fits so perfectly...you're absolutely brilliant. Peppermint Penicandey...Marzipan (that is how you spelled it, right?), and now Lolli...all your names are terrific. Increadibly original...and yet they still fit...each one for their specific character.
The part with Kale singing really surprised me...but turned out neat nonetheless. I really loved the words. Did you write them yourself? (I'm expecting you did but...you never know....^^;). Either way, they flowed and seemed...fitting...for Kale. (Really, if he started singing 'Hush Little Baby'/'Itsy Bitsy Spider' [as you put it].......I'd be like. Nyuuuuu...v_v Poor Kale...how far has he fallen? But it wasn't. So that made me happy. xD
I also loved Pepper's gifts...and the way you described each of them before their gift. Nicholas and Sylvia. ^_^ As long as they don't 'substitute' each other for the ones they've lost/can't have...then that could become such a sweet relationship. Lovely matchmaking on that part. ^^
All in all...whether the end is coming shorter than I expected or not...I am totally looking forward to it now...and can't wait! (Plus, you said you'd put up more of 'To Please the Wind' after you finish? *hopeful* ^^). Anyway, update soon please! (Don't follow my example...:gonk:) Your writing's as awesome as ever. xD ^_^ (Oh, and as a side note...just...for curiosity's sake...is smut going to somehow find it's way into this last chapter? I'm only just now realizing I haven't seen any thus far...*shamelessly loves your smut to near point of obsession* xP)
-Moonstar
Lollipop! xD That made me laugh. It just fits so perfectly...you're absolutely brilliant. Peppermint Penicandey...Marzipan (that is how you spelled it, right?), and now Lolli...all your names are terrific. Increadibly original...and yet they still fit...each one for their specific character.
The part with Kale singing really surprised me...but turned out neat nonetheless. I really loved the words. Did you write them yourself? (I'm expecting you did but...you never know....^^;). Either way, they flowed and seemed...fitting...for Kale. (Really, if he started singing 'Hush Little Baby'/'Itsy Bitsy Spider' [as you put it].......I'd be like. Nyuuuuu...v_v Poor Kale...how far has he fallen? But it wasn't. So that made me happy. xD
I also loved Pepper's gifts...and the way you described each of them before their gift. Nicholas and Sylvia. ^_^ As long as they don't 'substitute' each other for the ones they've lost/can't have...then that could become such a sweet relationship. Lovely matchmaking on that part. ^^
All in all...whether the end is coming shorter than I expected or not...I am totally looking forward to it now...and can't wait! (Plus, you said you'd put up more of 'To Please the Wind' after you finish? *hopeful* ^^). Anyway, update soon please! (Don't follow my example...:gonk:) Your writing's as awesome as ever. xD ^_^ (Oh, and as a side note...just...for curiosity's sake...is smut going to somehow find it's way into this last chapter? I'm only just now realizing I haven't seen any thus far...*shamelessly loves your smut to near point of obsession* xP)
-Moonstar
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved that last line. I so happy everything went well with the C-section, but i am sad the trilogy is ending. Please update again. I can't wait for the final face-off.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Hi. :3
After several weeks of dead internet, I can come back to say holy crap this is an amazing series. ^^() I love your style; the foreshadowing is perfect and the characters are awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
After several weeks of dead internet, I can come back to say holy crap this is an amazing series. ^^() I love your style; the foreshadowing is perfect and the characters are awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What is that sly devil up to? (Kale, that is)
Interesting development between Nicholas and Sylvia. I wasn't expecting that... I really thought Sylvia would end up an old maid or something; she seems so self-contained, WE don't even know anything about her. The thing about the pin gives us a glimpse of her as a child, and it's kind of sad... I wish Nicholas could speak!
Interesting development between Nicholas and Sylvia. I wasn't expecting that... I really thought Sylvia would end up an old maid or something; she seems so self-contained, WE don't even know anything about her. The thing about the pin gives us a glimpse of her as a child, and it's kind of sad... I wish Nicholas could speak!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Pepper is gone... somewhat anyway. She will be reborn... Hmm... I wonder.
And it looks like Kyle and Marzi will finally get some alone time after this... maybe.
Then there's still the agent who wants the baby... for who knows what reason still...
It's all so good! Damn, keep it up!
And now, just a little rant on something...
Reincarnation. The body and soul are like lock and key. One lock, one key to open the lock. However... in a rare event two keys can open the same lock. Two souls have the power to enter one body. One soul is clean, untarnished by life, while another is used, having lived it's own experiences on earth. And usually, that soul is the one in which a person once was, in another life, another time. However... one soul is usually overshadowed by another. And usually, the overshadowed soul is the one that has already lived it's own life. In a normal circumstance, a person lives thier life, with forgotten memories of thier former selves. However, events, actions, and sometimes others, can awaken the 'sleeping' soul, and the two souls begin to interact. As the two souls intertwine with each other, a person can experience flashes of the other's memory, although they may not know or understand just who or where these memories come from. These memories can be either tossed aside, or accepted.
Once accepted, it takes a great deal of energy, something very very big, to fully awaken the former self's soul. Once this is done, the two souls begin to fuse together to make one. As the souls become one, more and more memories, experiences and feelings are unleashed and the person understand both who they are now, and what they used to be before. Once they completely fuse, the two souls create an entirely new soul, and the new souls bears both the new memories it has to gain, and the old memories of thier former self.
And that is my view on reincarnation.
And it looks like Kyle and Marzi will finally get some alone time after this... maybe.
Then there's still the agent who wants the baby... for who knows what reason still...
It's all so good! Damn, keep it up!
And now, just a little rant on something...
Reincarnation. The body and soul are like lock and key. One lock, one key to open the lock. However... in a rare event two keys can open the same lock. Two souls have the power to enter one body. One soul is clean, untarnished by life, while another is used, having lived it's own experiences on earth. And usually, that soul is the one in which a person once was, in another life, another time. However... one soul is usually overshadowed by another. And usually, the overshadowed soul is the one that has already lived it's own life. In a normal circumstance, a person lives thier life, with forgotten memories of thier former selves. However, events, actions, and sometimes others, can awaken the 'sleeping' soul, and the two souls begin to interact. As the two souls intertwine with each other, a person can experience flashes of the other's memory, although they may not know or understand just who or where these memories come from. These memories can be either tossed aside, or accepted.
Once accepted, it takes a great deal of energy, something very very big, to fully awaken the former self's soul. Once this is done, the two souls begin to fuse together to make one. As the souls become one, more and more memories, experiences and feelings are unleashed and the person understand both who they are now, and what they used to be before. Once they completely fuse, the two souls create an entirely new soul, and the new souls bears both the new memories it has to gain, and the old memories of thier former self.
And that is my view on reincarnation.