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person Tahn
schedule August 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
*poke poke* Is this thing still on? Hey dude, lemme know if you update this please. I wanna know what happens. :D
person Sonya
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is starting to get good. You need to add another chapter. It is very intriguing, though I could see it going in other directions. ^_^ Well Please update soon.
Ja-Ne =^_^=
person Magnus
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a magnificent story: good detail; memorable characters; latent villain. I look forward to seeing how this turns out.
person Nick F.
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. It flows very nicely and the plot is rather solid. I love how you work the culture and different aspects of life and belief of the Nukatani into a contemporary story with modernity and its social value. In chapter 9, however, when you wrote Rachel did you mean Eileen?
person Neil
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great to have you back, it's been a while, but at least it'll mean I get to read the story all the way through. Enjoying the return already
person Acal
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your alive!! that was a great chapter i can't wait to see how you finish it off
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So when do you plan on updating? It has been a real long time and i have to know what happens in this story.
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What happened to the other chapters?????
person That Weird Kid You Know
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(ominous music) I like it. If I were an evil snake god trapped in the earth, that is what I would have done. Glad you haven't forgotten this story, keep it up!

The Me who isn't You
person fleur
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excelent story, you must update. please continue

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