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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked the blood bath at the beginning... adds to the tale...
and the end was written wonderfully... you used just the right amount of detail and discriptions...
i hope you continue, or make more stories like this...
regards,
Dark Disembodied
and the end was written wonderfully... you used just the right amount of detail and discriptions...
i hope you continue, or make more stories like this...
regards,
Dark Disembodied