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for Family Night: Pool Party

by Jaquard

schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy, muy caliente, ana maria
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good story, very hot. keep them coming!
person Jaquard
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the reviews, everyone.

SKC, that will be a bit difficult, seeing as no-where in the canon (love that word) of the FN-series was there ever hinted at another family member. Even if this person suddenly arrives at the house, I would find it personally too difficult to write that person in. Too many questions would need to be answered and emotional turmoil of each character would need to be visited. Do you (and anybody else) think there is room for such non-PWP stuff in this series? Sure, you could spin off maybe some confused sex, maybe some rape that turns into consensual sex. Another way would be to have the person show up as a stranger to one or two members and just leave at the right time (before he/she is caught out)... :-)
person SKC
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. . .you just keep getting better and better. How about a family night where there is a family reunion?
person Lumpkin
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Encore!
That was a great, well written story.
Hope there will be another chapter
KEEP IT GREESY
person l\'etje
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was ver very fun,keep going and post sooooooon
bye

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