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for Not so Ordinary Life

by Lumpkin

schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
super hot, excellent story!
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really curious as to what happened to the original story! I remember reading it a few years ago and loving it, less angst, the younger twins being a lot younger, Amanda and Warren being together rather than finding other people. Did you just take it down and re-vamp it or were you even the original writer? cause I would love to find the old version again. not that I don't love this one, it's just hard to read sex and angst together, they take away the mood from each other for me at least

and you might wanna get a proof reader, your story needs it
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please post more asap this story is awesome and really hott!!
person Annie
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
confused at the sudden switch with the twins in this chapter (thought it was sam dating Kitty?) but I love this story! it makes me happy lol nothing like great incest with young kids. hope to see more soon!
Annie
person Keri
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're story is hot and so are apples. No, seriously, great update and pease keep them coming.
person K
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter, update soon
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So fucking sexy.
Every chapter gets me horny.
Good job.
person eww
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
drugs...now i ahte this story...
person Hermyone
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is hot, can't wait for the next update
person Guzba
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, what else is there to say :D