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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, if you could put a little more of interest into the story, this could be a great fic... I really like it and would love to see more chapters and even a lemon *winks* now, that would be great^__^ but if you think you're losing interest, it's better to end it there (ch6)
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story intrigues me...I look forward to more, hopefully a bit longer. Some backstory wouldn't hurt, but it's not required or anything.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT. Excuse me while I wipe my hot white cum off the keyboard.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like where the plot is going. I also wanted to point out that there were some name typos and the conversation between mother and son was stilted and very contrived but like you said it\'s 6am who cares..it\'s still good fiction.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah two chapters in one go. You shouldn\'t have really...you may have gone to bed at 6...I just started reading like an addict at 6am. And I have school at 8. I really need to go to bed.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like. of course adding incest will always hook me. i\'m intrigued about the green book. you really didn\'t put much thought into this?