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for Left Turn

by Memme

person kt
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter 3 was so well written. i've read a lot of slash b/f but the way you wrote that scene made it seem so much more intimate than just sex. beatifully written... I'm glad I got a chance to read it:-).
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read up to chapter four...I\'m about to read the rest, but I just had to stop and say...Kaiserslautern! I lived in Germany for about 2 years and that\'s where I lived^^ That\'s just...neat^^ And...omg! Nutella rocks. Hardcore.

okay...also need to say. I love this story all the way to death and back^^ It\'s the first non fanfic story I\'ve read on this site and it\'s very well written and...and I love Chance and Jack, can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person some chick
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want to see more jack. chance and sean are making me too sad. that\'s terrible what happened to his friend.
person laid-back
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the story fo far. i like having it from both p-o-v but i ahve to wonder how we went from Wisconsin to West Virginia? i would have thought you would have put CS at a school in Wisconsin to be closer to Jack instead you end up in northern West Virginia. just a wonder.
person kikvws
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, even more than Right Turn. Great new chappies, I love that you\'ve taken the time to bounce off both views...I guess I vote for both *lol*. Excellent paths for both, always looking forward to more from you!!
person tyranimo
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Suck a cute story! XD

Stick with Chance, he\'s WAAAAAAAAY cuter <3

Yeah. Such a cute story.

Nyahhh :P

If the others really want to know what Jack did in their absense, maybe you could just let Jack relate it to Chance later on, and put it as a flashback or something.. :P

But yay! <3 Chance cuuutie <3
person Lin
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want to know how Chance is doing!! And did he know Jake before!? I hope you update soon. This was a interesting and very frustrating chapter! ^^
person kikvws
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy. This is kicking some serious ass, I like it even better than right turn. Please don\'t end it there, evil, please! They need some Midwestern lovin\' I think ^_^
person some chick
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fiiiine. i see what you\'re saying. i\'ll have to make due with chance and jack.
person some chick
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AN EDIT?! SCREW YOU! *sniff* i was all exicited cos i thought there was a NEW CHAPTER!!! an edit. :P hurry up. i need more jack/chance slash.