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Unfinished story... Are you gone forever ???

Your french reader,
Merely Truth

i love this story. i can not wait for the next update. i really enjoy chance and jack and i so can not wait for them to get together ovr spring break. i love the development of sean as well. he's real and that kiss between him and chance was to sweet - even though it only confirmed he likes girls. great update. hurry - need more left turns in my life...lol

Super story! Frankly I've been slogging through so many 'meh' slash pieces lately that I'd almost given up hope of finding some that were well written 'and' plot driven. I've found both in this great fic. Looking forward to many more chapters. :)

Alisha

I'm a sucker for your writing style, Memmzies... *holds back on the fangirl-isms as best as she can*

The 'round-about way they handled that situation was adorable, and I wasn't expecting Sean to suggest that kiss. It kind of reminds me of my friends. ^_^ But I'm glad that you took my (hopefully very subtle, but knowing me I was fangirl-istic and blunt) advice and Chance is trying to move on. This will definitely make things difficult if Chance and one of his attempted boyfriends come home to Babs and find her talking with Jack at the kitchen table. XD

Ah, ignore me. My mind likes to get away with me and I tend to ramble, as you well know. =) Great job, as usual.

Woo-hoo...there's something I wasn't sure we'd see despite all the sexual tension there. Sean and Chance; that was surprisingly borderline hot, if it hadn't reaffirmed Sean's sexuality *stomps on his foot*. I love the way you're dealing with Sean's honest struggle to understand his gay friends...it's so sweet the way he keeps trying, even though it's obviously somewhat of an enigma to him. And aww...Chance's thoughts keep heading back to Jack *cheers*. Whatever happens, looking forward to more from you!

-sniffle-
The sex chapter made me cry. ;-;
Omigawrz... you should soo continue. If you don't, Ill eat you! >.<

My, oh my, you've been busy. Excellent, I was so thrilled to see an update! For as big of an ass as Jack's been, I can't help but cross my fingers that he hunts down Chance and they hook up again. *sigh* But, I am aware that I shouldn't trust you too much to give me what I want *lol ===>See: Right Turn*. That's one thing I've really loved about your ficcies; you're unpredictable. Just when I think I've got the smoke and mirrors figured out, you trip me and take off in another direction. *huggles* Loved the latest chappies, looking forward to more!

write more. must know what happens. Don't put Jack and babs together. thats that just wrong.

Ahhh! No fair! I wanna hear both of them. *LOL* And when do they meet up again?

I forgot to add I hope Chance and Sean become close friends too (well that and that Chance eventually feels open enough to confide in Sean like a friend *LOL*) But as couples go, I think it'd be cool if he and Jack met. ^.^