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I can't believe I passed this story up!

Update soon! That Hadrian is such an SOB.

When is Luca coming back?

Anyway update!

darkangel1210

I missed you - and your wicked, evil imagination.

Thanks for continuing the story!

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Woot. Hun, you are just awesome like that. You are the best writer I've seen in a while. Rob has read it... HE LOVES IT!

This was a delightful chapter. Thoroughly enjoyed watching the young slaves having fun in the shower.

Hope Raf gets to leave with Leon. Although, perhaps Hadrian should punish them for being naughty...

Yay. You made Jace very happy. My favorite place to have sex is in the shower. o.O *pets Leon* That was a loverly chapter. I can't wait to see what you have next. I don't have any suggestions at the moment but I might think of something for next time.

More please!!

*twitches* Calling them love slaves just sounds weird to me. Love is a connotation of warmth and happiness, it doesn\'t immediately bring sex to my mind. *counts* Sex is about the seventh thing that comes to mind when someone says the word love. I think calling them pleasure slaves would be less weird. Because that\'s what they\'re used for. Pleasure. Ok. I think I\'ve gone on with that rant enough. I\'m sure the difference doesn\'t bother other people as much. Oh well. *shrugs* I can\'t wait to see what Raf thinks of Leon liking his position as a fuck toy - err pleasure slave. *rubs hands together* It should prove interesting. I can\'t wait for you to write more so now, I bow. *bows and mutters underbreath about the stupid rhymes that plague him*
Good night, Leon.

Hey hey... an original I didn\'t shun within the first ten seconds. I love it... keep going and I love your writing style and all the detail. You\'re charector\'s are relatable and the reactions understandable, which is rare find in original writings. You know, those authors that say , I don\'t know why he did that, because I wanted him to. I can see why each did what they did. I don\'t know if I\'m making any sence or dragging on a point you got the first time I said it. Any ways. Keep going... I .... need... more.

Ohhh, this was a lovely chapter. Such a great contrast to the last one.

I guess it\'s too soon for Hadrian to soften up? (If that was ever in the plan at all.)

Having Leon and Raf share their pasts could be interesting. Will Raf still like Leon when he learns he was a willing sex slave? Could at least lead to some very angsty moments.

I\'ve definitely come to care for the characters.