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Ohhh, way interesting!

WOW! When I saw that this had been updated, I was like, "WOOOOO! It's about goddamn time!" But I see you have an excuse, so I forgive you. This is a very good fiction. I've been waiting for chapter 3 for awhile ya know. Its on my reccommended reading list. ^_^! Yukio is sweet and I can't help but wonder if there is more to him that has been explored so far, but the one who really intrigues me is Satoshi. He's evil, and a bit blinded by his pride and money, but I think maybe he's a small scared little boy underneath it all, and Yukio can make him a man! Ok maybe I'm thinking about it too much, but I'm so interested! Good'un!

~C~

oh this' s very interesting story , update soon , neh ? I like this story verymuch

wow, great story...can\'t wait for the next chapter.

OMG!!!
It is really one of the most interesting stories I have read so far!!! Too bad the chapters are so short though.
Please update soon so I can continue reading.

Read you soon.

Nice story. Your characters are really complex and interesting and I already like them both. I'm very intrigued about what it's going to happen.

Ohhh. This first chapter is so beautifully awkward. I love the malicious nature of your lead! And the tempting sight of this pretty young thing. I'm very eager to learn the plot twists:) I did notice a few instances where your tense shifts into present. Since the majority of the narrative is in past tense, these instances are quite confusing. I'd suggest that you be careful with your tense useage in the future, but other than that, it was quite clean. I'll toddle off and look at the rest now. Cheers!

man what an ass

Wow i like this...update soon please!!!

Awww... Poor Yukio. PLEASE update soon!!