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for My Behest

by bambi4real

person Red hematite
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! Thanks for updating so soon! Eddie is funny, lol. Poor Kara! Awful to be called at that time in the morning to hear how your friend doesn’t like your advice. Eddie is kind of selfish; he doesn’t remember the way he left her, she must have been worried, and he wasn’t very kind then either. Anyway it’s not like Christian gave Eddie too much choice, about dating...or about anything. I find funny the way Eddie still thinks about Rayne every time he can but he founds Christian a total hottie. This was a funny chapter...I wonder how Rayne, Eddie and Christian will end....a lot of ideas are crossing my mind, lol
person Kiira
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, so hot! I like this Eddy character, so much! :)
this is like funny and hot and interesting and yeah, me likie...
person yue
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What I'm waiting for now is for Christian, Rayne, and Collins to get into a brawl fighting over eddieeeeee
person chrysler
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn....that was hot! A real interesting turn of events there, i wasn't expecting that, i wasn't even expecting Rayne to be gay....i thought collin liked him and yeah, he was gonna go to collin instead but i like this, it goes around the predictable and its nicely written i must add....your characters are SO fucking hott!!!!! Can't wait to see what you do next. Update soon please.
person kolgrim
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m reviewing again, well, I can\'t help it. Two updates so quickly! Well, now you left in a place that makes me really, really want to read more and fast...oh boy...
person yue
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*melts*

person Yami
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good ending. i am looking forward to your next chapter ^_^
person aurora
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
last part of chapter 8 was H-O-T *fans self* yummy!!!!!!! all the chapters were great really all the major characters are interesting (Rayne is a bit of a mystery) I love stories with a lil humor in there and funny internal dialouge gets me soooo hooked on a story........lovin your story chick *does nice guy pose*
person Red hematite
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your style and your story rocks. Your main character is really funny eve if he has real problems. Can\'t wait to read more.
person kolgrim
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy that you updated this! Oh, but...please, more, soon? :)