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awwwwwww update asap please? I'm loving it

AHHHH OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! UPDATE SOON AND MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER CUZ I CANT GET ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM SERIUSLY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY I NEED AND CRAVE MORE!!!!!

Wow, this is really great. I'm loving this story, usuakky when I have read story's "like this" they have annoyed me like hell, but this is so good!

Holy crap! It's a love-pentagon!!

I love the scence with Rayne, that was so cute and i'm glad collin isn't mad. It was mean but i have the weirdest sense of humor and in my mind, i kinda found it funny Christian shoving Collin-as tall as he is-in a itty bitty locker. lol, i'm stupid. Anyway, update soon please. I wanna see how he's gonna confront chrisitan. Oh and i didn't once think that it was a pity read though i'm glad u confirmed it. Um Travis isn't suppose to be that good, there's no way a new dad could be so just heads up in to what u'll be seeing in future chaps. Thanks for reading ^^

I've just started reading this, but I like the first person view and I like the opening paragraph. It takes us immediately into the world of the character and we want to know what his outcome will be. I'm going to read the rest of this!

Funny chapter. Christian was really funny being so jelous. I was expecting something like this, as Christian seemed kind of possesive talking about exclusivity and Ward is so close to Colin and Kara. Ward thinks he might have a problem, lol. I'm very intrigued about what's going to happen.

"Oh Ward! This is great! I mean think about it. He's so tall and dangerous and dreamy and you are shoooo shweet and cuddly-waldly!"

That was SOO hilarious, that laugh did more damage to my already sore throat but it was so worth it. Can't wait for more. I wonder what Christian's gonna do when he finds he's been played and the thought that Rayne MIGHT potentially like him is so great but i'll keep collin still at the edge of the picture so i don't get any frightning suprises that might cause a heart attack. Either way, i'd love whoever u put him with but i hope its RAyne or Christian. Great chapter!

Thanks for updating so soon! Your Eddie is one of the best and funniest characters I’ve ever read. But I have to know what happens next! Your style is just amazing! So funny and interesting at the same time. I even like Christian a lot. Great chapter!

*turns Ward over and spanks his bottom* Bad Ward Bad Bad Bad.....I this story can go in so many ways mmmm lovin it!!!