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for My Behest

by bambi4real

person Bloodykisses
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story totally rules, please update soon. Christian is a little possessive, but then again i guess that was the point huh. Ok, and i just know that Collin is head over heals for Ward, is he fucking bi? If not then how the heck does he manage to get a hard on with girls? Please elaborate on him!! lol, i guess i am a fan for Ed and Collin. Collins so cute trying to protect him at all times...so yeah...anywho!! good going aye and please update soon. Bye
person Katie
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I simply A-D-O-R-E this, it is too cute, and too good and please, please, please have Ward like Chris and NOT Reyn. I think it's really mean to date a person only because you like their best-friend, and as creepy-possessive as Christian is, he doesn't deserve to be used like that, no one does. This isn't a flame, by the way. I truly love this story, but, it just seems kinda mean, you know? So, if you can, could you sneak in some kind of affection for him, just a little? Oh, and update SOON, PLEASE!!! :^)
person anonymous_fan
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story girl but could yous top with all the cliffhangers???
Im like on the edge of my seat waiting for those two bods to go and shag and you stop it as they get to the good parts! *sobs*
person Red hematite
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks! Great update! I loved this scene, I love the Eddie-Christian moments especailly when Eddie thinks that Christian is a brute but that doesn't matter. It was funny and tender at the same time. Just great!
person Kiira
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I was so waiting for this! Thank you, you made my day by updating! Liked the chapter very much, you always leave craving for more! So please, pretty please, update soon again, okay? =)
person kt
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the dialogue...and the stoyr line...and the characters...and the writing style...and...and...everything about it. thanks for sharing please update more.
person yue
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah....He does deliver a lot of rather...bad lines...

lol.

I don't think he's a slut, just b/c he's had a fantasy about the dude for such a long time, and is sleeping with his best friend.....It's hard to let go of some fantasies sometimes....
person doesitmatter
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEN ARE U GOING TO FUCKING UPDATE THIS FUCKING STORRY I THOUGHT IT WAS SOO GOOD BUT I GUESS ILL NEVER KNOW SINCE U WONT UPDATE IT!!!!!....CANT U SEE THIS IS LIKE FUCKING DRUGS FOR ME I NEED MORE OF THIS GOD DAMN MOTHER FUCKING STORY!...geez
person Red hematite
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I'm glad to see you back! Hope the exams went well. I love this story and I loved this chapter. You are great at portraying Ward`s confusion and I really like him wirh Christian. Rayne was also very sweet. Ca't wait to see what happens next.
person Kiira
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yay, another chapter! It was soo good, can`t wait for more! =)