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for My Behest

by bambi4real

person doesitmatter
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY UPDATE SOON!!!
person Misery_loves_company
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOAH! HELL YEAH, this is amazing. Loving it. When's Rayne gonna intervene, along with collin? he hasn't appeared in awhile. The drama will so be so sweet. Please update soon?
person yue
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope this doesnt come off as reviewing just to get more chapters, but i really do hope you feel better =)
person Jaye
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more then. I'm excited to see what happens with christian and eddy. I can't pick who i'd rather have him with. Maybe a 3some? Haha. Anyway, like the person above me said, does one more review past 50 count? If so, UPDATE!!
person anonymous_fan
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
grrrrr damn that dad for interrupting them! i wish i could slap him or sumthin
he's so mean! oh well *sigh* another great chapter as usual and also could
you make it so that ed falls for him and stops loving rayne cuz he seems like
such a sweet guy and i think it would really crush him if edward got with rayne......
but you dont have to listen to me lol. anyways(!) luved the chapter and cant wait
for the next!
person Red hematite
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter! Intense, sweet and hot at the same time. I liked how Christian acted here and how he explained that about his dad. I love how you portray him, he's an animal in one part and he seems really insecure in the other. And I love Ward´s comments. They are always just for the moment. Great update!
person J
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jesus dude, dont be so mean to Christian, lol. I kinda like him....Dont be so mean to him....Have Ward like christian...:)
person Kiira
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do they ever get to do it? ;) I really liked this chapter too, and as always, I`m eagerly waiting for more :) I also hope that you continue that other story of yours, because I love it too, and it would be a shame to abandon such a good story!
person supercaptain182
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me. I love this story so much. THe new turn in events, especially, is making me addicted.
person RedCoat
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooo great story. Read it while I was suppose to doing history home work *sweats*. Anyway, I loove your characters and I truly do hope the Ward and Christian make it. They really are perfect for one another.