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for My Behest

by bambi4real

person Kiira
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy that you updated, I\'m so happy that AFF is back, that slash story\'s are back.

That was a really good chapter! Finally they had sex ;) Bad Christian though, didn\'t use condom, I hope he was healthy at least, please tell me he is? =)

Can\'t wait for more!

person Jaye
schedule March 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank god aff is back, i\'ve missed this story sooo much and u updated it right when we got back so that really made my day!!!! No, i found this chapter to be ten times funnier. lol, poor ward, that was hilarious!!! YES! thank u, thank u. Can\'t wait for the 3-some. *fangasms* THANK U!!!
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad too that AFF is back, I was so waiting for this =D I\'m so glad that you updated today, I was hoping that you would! But, oh, now I\'m so confused, I do not know who is it that I hope Ward would end up with anymore =) But you\'ll make the decision, and I\'m happy with what ever it might be. I love this story no matter what! Really I do =)
This story makes me smile, and I love it!


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(I\'m also glad that you read that story of mine, I know it\'s hard to read, it\'s very hard to write as well. I\'ve not completely decided of where I\'m going to take it, it tends to lead the way when I write. I can tell this though; even though most of my story\'s are dark and sad, there\'s always romance as well. \"Silent\" is indeed very dark, but at the same time, in the later chapters, there\'s true love as well. Maybe someday you\'ll read it, skip the darker parts if you will, but I can totally understand that it is not every ones cup of tea. I\'ve become to care for those characters,so that it is the most hardest story for me to write...)
person Chrysler
schedule March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t stop laughing that was crazy! omg! lmao. That was priceless, all ur characters are great, i LOVE them all. I can relate to kara too, i would\'ve screamed. hahaha. Its great, i loved it. No, no, don\'t listen to Jaye...she crazy. Rayne, come on, he\'s great, don\'t forget him!!! Anywho, the ending was great, i can\'t wait for the next chapter. How\'s eddie gonna get himself out of this? This was a great chapter.
person Red hematite
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha..very good chapter! If I were Kara I wouldn't refuse...with someone asking like that. Fate against them...that was hillarius, Ward knows how to sound like a drama queen, lol. I didn't review the last chapter because I read it and I thought I reviewed it and when I checked after reading your note I realized I didn't. I wouldn't call the chapter before this one sucky or bad. You write a lot of chapters, great chapters and it's logical that some are better than the others. Anyway I keep talking about Christian and Ward but I wouldn't mind a little Rayne and Ward (But poor Christian then, I really like him, lol. About Collin, I don't know, I like his friendship with Ward, I'm not sure if I'd like that to change. Besides, Collin is streight, right? right? right? Great chapter!
person jaye
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heheh *looks guilty* YAY! threesome *drool* collin and him were too adorable in this chapter so i say collin/eddy/christian....did i get it?
For a minute there, i thought his mother called him a hoe lol, i but saw that u were missing an n not an e so ...haha. that whole kitchen thing was hilarious. it soooo obvious collin doesn't want this
person anonymous_fa
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahahahahaha lovin this chapter especially the horny fag part lol
waiting with baited breath for the next chapter
person Kiira
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that I didn't review on your last chapter. Back then I couldn't think of anything to say. It wasn't your best work, yes, but all of us writers have to have that one moment, I think. Lord knows I have those often! And it was important for your story, so. =) I do still love your story! So is Colin warming up on Ward? ;) hm? I can't wait to read what happens next! Honestly, this is very top of my favorite story's here, and no, I'm not just saying that. :)
person doesitmatter
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHH MORE MORE MORE I NEED MORE!!
person J
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is NOT your best chapter, i can assure you that. 0_0 However, since you did so good on the previous ones, i will give you the benifit of the doubt and will continue reading....But please dont just put anything up, as much as i want to continue reading this story, i dont want just any shitty chapter that will kill it all...sorry...but your last chapter sucked...=/ But dont worry, because i KNOW you CAN do better, because the ones before this last one were AWESOME...so even though the reviewers want another chapter (including myself) We prefer to get good ones...(or at least i do) Dont rush, take your time, and make a point for every chapter. This last one, i saw no point to it, it was just...........there. Anyways, hope you dont take this in a bad way, cause i really will continue reading this story, but please dont continue to kill it. Or im afraid i will stop. Other than that, get to work, and make a new chapter...AND DONT RUSH....(but at the same time, please hurry up..hehehe..) ok bye