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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh you just made my day; thank you, thank you, thank you!
I've been waiting for update for so long and now I am happy, this chapter was worth the wait, thought you left an evil cliffhanger! So I can only hope there won't be too long wait for the next chap ^_^ What is going to happen? Are they going to do it? Ward going to cheat on his boyfriend? And Rayne his friend? Will Christian find out? Oooh so many questions! I loved the scene, could almost feel what Ward was feeling, all the inner struggle and giving in.
Great work!
I've been waiting for update for so long and now I am happy, this chapter was worth the wait, thought you left an evil cliffhanger! So I can only hope there won't be too long wait for the next chap ^_^ What is going to happen? Are they going to do it? Ward going to cheat on his boyfriend? And Rayne his friend? Will Christian find out? Oooh so many questions! I loved the scene, could almost feel what Ward was feeling, all the inner struggle and giving in.
Great work!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I saw this story today and immediately remembered your name from what Kolgrim told me about your stories. She said you are one of her favorite authors so I kind of decided to give you a try.
^__^
A very good story. Ed's life surely took an interesting turn. And he gets so much attention from all those hot guys, hehe. You know, when you write that Ed is with Christian, you make me want him to be with Christian. When he is with Rayne, I want him to be with Rayne. But I know deep down inside he is going to be with Colin. I know it, you put too many clues to let me think otherwise.
And I feel so sorry for what he has to go through, Colin I mean. His friend, who never sees him as something more than a friend ... Having to give away the one who he loves to somebody else ... And staying there all time while Ed and Christian, well, got all physical ... Poor guy! I do so hope Ed will mess up everything between himself and Christian and Rayne and will end up running to Colin. And I hope Colin will finally do something about his feelings for Edward.
I will watch for thenext chapter of this story. I have to say that you have a unique style of writing, making me almost believe I see everything happening in front of me. A truly great talent. *bows to the author* Great job!
I saw this story today and immediately remembered your name from what Kolgrim told me about your stories. She said you are one of her favorite authors so I kind of decided to give you a try.
^__^
A very good story. Ed's life surely took an interesting turn. And he gets so much attention from all those hot guys, hehe. You know, when you write that Ed is with Christian, you make me want him to be with Christian. When he is with Rayne, I want him to be with Rayne. But I know deep down inside he is going to be with Colin. I know it, you put too many clues to let me think otherwise.
And I feel so sorry for what he has to go through, Colin I mean. His friend, who never sees him as something more than a friend ... Having to give away the one who he loves to somebody else ... And staying there all time while Ed and Christian, well, got all physical ... Poor guy! I do so hope Ed will mess up everything between himself and Christian and Rayne and will end up running to Colin. And I hope Colin will finally do something about his feelings for Edward.
I will watch for thenext chapter of this story. I have to say that you have a unique style of writing, making me almost believe I see everything happening in front of me. A truly great talent. *bows to the author* Great job!
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really missed this story, so I was so glad when I found that there was a new chapter up! So thank you *hugs*
Your main character, is actually one of my favorite characters of storys that I've read here. He's just so funny and cute and etc. Anyway, so finally got a sort of kiss from Rayne? hm... Interesting, can't wait to see what happens next.
And about what you said in the beginning of the chapter, about having a kind of conversation with reviewers, I totally get that =)
Your main character, is actually one of my favorite characters of storys that I've read here. He's just so funny and cute and etc. Anyway, so finally got a sort of kiss from Rayne? hm... Interesting, can't wait to see what happens next.
And about what you said in the beginning of the chapter, about having a kind of conversation with reviewers, I totally get that =)
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay for some drama!! i love this story. update soon.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 21
Madlodger was here.
Oh, no update...
Hi, bambi4real , I am really enjoying this story, the whole idea is pretty original. Not leaving a review is a terrible oversight on my part. Sorry, Bambi. I like My Behest because it is so realistic. Most people won't have their first sexual experience with the one they really want. And the fact that it was screwd up and imperfect... Well this is one of the best plot developments I have read lately. You have acheived a fine balance between fantasy and reality. I can't wait to read moore of this. Thank you for writing, bambi4real.
Madlodger was here.
Oh, no update...
Hi, bambi4real , I am really enjoying this story, the whole idea is pretty original. Not leaving a review is a terrible oversight on my part. Sorry, Bambi. I like My Behest because it is so realistic. Most people won't have their first sexual experience with the one they really want. And the fact that it was screwd up and imperfect... Well this is one of the best plot developments I have read lately. You have acheived a fine balance between fantasy and reality. I can't wait to read moore of this. Thank you for writing, bambi4real.
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost jumped from joy, when I saw that you had updated this. =)It just leaves me wanting more and more! I like Kara's character, she's so um... 'crazy' lol
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh... so I finally get around to reviewing... AMAZING! Anyways... great story... I complimented it... now write more.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, here it is 3am and I am supposed to be working on a talk due thursday and instead I read your story straight through. I have loved it so far. Now I have to sit and wait for updates...how depressing. I have to say I was hoping Ward's first time would have been with Colin. Colin is madly in love with him. It is obvious. Please don't give him an STD...just scare the living daylights out of him so he never forgets. That's good enough. And please keep up the great work.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really missed this story! I'm so glad that you updated. I'm mad to Christian for treating Ward like that. It's good that he has Colin there with him... hm... wondering will there be anything between those two later on...
Anyway, good work, hoping to read more of this soon! =)
Anyway, good work, hoping to read more of this soon! =)
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful exit XD A hola for Ward !! * stand up,hold his arms up then low them down* I\'m sad...I was really thinking that Colin would taste Edward first. Good chapter anyways ^^