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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The rest of the story can be found here m.fictionpress.com/s/1797363/23
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
just a tiny thing ch3 a couple of paragraphs before the end
you have
"I got to ride shot gun. Christian was silent and Kara was fiddling with the radio."
and I'm pretty sure you mean
"I got to ride shot gun. Colin was silent and Kara was fiddling with the radio."
you have
"I got to ride shot gun. Christian was silent and Kara was fiddling with the radio."
and I'm pretty sure you mean
"I got to ride shot gun. Colin was silent and Kara was fiddling with the radio."
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I really, really love this. It's completely amazing, and I love Christian, and Colin, and Rayne's pretty cool. And Ed's amazing, if acting like a bit of a slut, but hey, teenage hormones, hard to control ;)
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok sorry for contacting u this way but i wasnt able to see ur email address and i would love for u to beta my story. my email is karamasg@yahoo.com
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I've spend the day catching up with fics and yours came to my mind. Anyway, any hope for an udate soon? :) Because I really do enjoy this fic and the other one too!
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My crappy goodness. That was...uh...speechless. I don't know what to say...still have nothing to said.... Oh my goodness!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDD That was freaking awesome. Finally some Ed and Ranye action. Oooohhhh. But, I'm a Colin and Ed fangirl. Colin is yummy!!! perfection all the way. Love your story. Keep up the good work and no rush. Take your time. XD
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! From the bottom of my little black heart, I ask you to send me an e-mail when you update at: justice02908@yahoo.com
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read this storie and im in love...i adore the way u make ur characters come alive. i feel like i know them ....update soon please!!!!!
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 23
Yes! An update! It was so long that I went ahead and reread the entire thing. Ones again I would like to let you know how good this fic is:) Very well written, I get vivid images in my head, which is a sign of a good writer:)
Finally Ward got to kiss Rayne; he didn't beleive that that could ever happen on the beginning.
I was reading story warnings and realized that we have M/M/M and DP there. And MaleDom, wow. Was it there before? This is scary now! And they are making out sitting on 'king-size bed of majestic proportions'! With Chris in the house! Oh, this is very worrysom. I get this feeling that shit is about to hit a fan, so to speak. You've got to update again, like, tomorrow! LOL
What exactly 'LemonNA' stand for? Non-angst? Non-abuse? Non-anal? I was raking my brains about it, nothing comes to mind.
I am glad that you double-space paragraths now, much easier on the eyes:)
Names of chapters are very creative, like them a lot.
Overall, very good job, bambi,
Thank you:-D
Yes! An update! It was so long that I went ahead and reread the entire thing. Ones again I would like to let you know how good this fic is:) Very well written, I get vivid images in my head, which is a sign of a good writer:)
Finally Ward got to kiss Rayne; he didn't beleive that that could ever happen on the beginning.
I was reading story warnings and realized that we have M/M/M and DP there. And MaleDom, wow. Was it there before? This is scary now! And they are making out sitting on 'king-size bed of majestic proportions'! With Chris in the house! Oh, this is very worrysom. I get this feeling that shit is about to hit a fan, so to speak. You've got to update again, like, tomorrow! LOL
What exactly 'LemonNA' stand for? Non-angst? Non-abuse? Non-anal? I was raking my brains about it, nothing comes to mind.
I am glad that you double-space paragraths now, much easier on the eyes:)
Names of chapters are very creative, like them a lot.
Overall, very good job, bambi,
Thank you:-D