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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this it's so great and so mysterious. I love the Mad Hatter is he a ghost/dillusion as well?
please keep going!!!!!!!
please keep going!!!!!!!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really love the story! Keep up the good work! I really love the whole freaky ghost thing!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn and I was begining to like patrick, as long as you make up for that. ;) Keep up the good work. You have me dying for me.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god this story is so freaky....please don't kill the brother! You can kill simon though and the damn doctor. I am beginnin to wander if the Hatter isn't one of those people he keeps seeing, you should eventually reveal his character. And at some point et him be free of the institution,cause he's cool...and can he ever find someone to love?
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t want Simon to die so....Patrick it is, he\'s not really that important anyway. And I want to see Simon go all crazy cause Wills not there. XD
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hooked, Im addicted, I want to read more! MORE! Dear God, Im going to have a fit! lol. Keep up the good work. This is an amazing story. I love it. I identify with it on so many levels. My kind of darkness, my kind of cynism, my kind of humor . . . kind of weird I don\'t write like that. But anyway, update soon please, or I\'ll start threatening you. ;)
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I would like to say this is an excellent story. I hate how few people review to excellent stories. I\'m not finished the story yet, but I wanted to review now so I dont forget. Im absent minded. This is a very well thought out story, unlike some other insane asylum stories ive read. This one is descriptive and very creatively realistic. I hope to read more of your work.
Have a good day!
-Meagan
Have a good day!
-Meagan
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rurichan,
I am really enjoying reading your story; it is well written and captivated. I am intrigued with the mindset of Will, towards the asylum, Dr. “Snow” and his brother. I also like the bond and attachment towards Simon that Will has acquired in the few chapters. I can\'t wait for the fallowing chapters to find out what happens to poor Will and his new ability (weather it be real or just in his mind). It’s a splendid and also cruel way to end this chapter…but it seems to be your style. I hope you don’t make me wait too long for Chapter 6 to find out what is happening.
One of your readers,
Kel
I am really enjoying reading your story; it is well written and captivated. I am intrigued with the mindset of Will, towards the asylum, Dr. “Snow” and his brother. I also like the bond and attachment towards Simon that Will has acquired in the few chapters. I can\'t wait for the fallowing chapters to find out what happens to poor Will and his new ability (weather it be real or just in his mind). It’s a splendid and also cruel way to end this chapter…but it seems to be your style. I hope you don’t make me wait too long for Chapter 6 to find out what is happening.
One of your readers,
Kel