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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great story. I really loved it, and even though I'm sorry it's over and would love to read more about this couple, it was a great ending, too.
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heey! I know this story!... Wasn't this on fictionpress somewhere?... Knew I'd seen this before...
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it´s so blunt!!! Especially the ending...
Hope you will write maybe a short small story with them aggain???
Hope you will write maybe a short small story with them aggain???
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's it?
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it is so cute! need more!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was wonderful! i just love the way you made Brad's character! i can't wait to read the next chapter! Your writing is really good, wiuth minimal if any mistakes in grammar and such (i'm not very good at it so i don't notice it always if it's there any way) very nice formatting and detailing and getting the quality of each character expressed.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, I like brad, he reminds me of someone I know (the way he's all serious on the outside but has a strange little obssesion on the inside). I look forward to the next chapter.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, it's different and I hope you will keep it up!!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, thanx for mailing me! Yay, good chapter! Poor Eli, not getting what he wants. Brad's gonna he sore tomorrow! lol! if you could keep reminding me, that would be great!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty cute. I'm curious as to what qualifies as an "old" man in Eli's eyes, since it seems Eli's about 20 and Brad is about 35 (ages based on the fact that Eli's in school and Brad's an office boss). I love Eli's freight train dating tactics. I'll have to try that some day!