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for Splitsville (Unedited Draft)

by CamliaWaite

person Female Reader
schedule January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Splitsville was a really good read, thank you for sharing!

I felt the effort to make this story an interisting read, and it shows successful, in my opinion.
It's funny, thrilling, sexy, and I swear I could feel the love while reading it.
I'm glad that despite not that much feedback, this story was kinda finished and didn't left me hanging, so to speak.

Spoiler-Alert:
I liked the story-idea and the whole concept of beeing with oneselves, a long time fantasy of mine!
Spoieler-Alert-End!
person DcBaBaZ1
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm an English and Physics student (uni level), so after reading the first chapter I feel obliged to point out both that Mary Shelley's surname is spelled with a second 'e', and that there's absolutely no way most real particle accelerators could do anything much besides accelerate particles, create magnetic or electric disturbances, or explode. Maybe a Modified Quantum-Magnetic Neutron Reactor (i.e. some fake machine) would have been better. I'm a complainer, but I wouldn't have reviewed unless I enjoyed the story, although as I said I'm only on the first chapter at the moment. I might review again later, or not.
person ^CH^
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That story was funny and hot and witty and just damn great... some parts just had me laughing like crazy, hehe, awesome story, much kudos
person neom
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want you to know that you made my day with your fic. And after reading it, my life seemed so perfect to me (yes, I'm sentimental...x) Hee. Thanks!

Though now I wish I have a twin of some kind >____> -coughsahems-


AND I WANT THAT SEQUEL NOOOOW x(
person Penny
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing~! I\'m really loving it. Do continue as soon as you can!
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you totally should keep writing this. nanowrimo is very challenging and difficult, but keep going! *two thumbs up!*
person Penny
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Nanowrimo! I wanted to do one; in fact, I should have done one, but I\'m not doing it under the claim that I don\'t have time. Ehem. Right. However, this one is an amazing read! To be honest, I was just looking for trashy femslash, but when I found this I couldn\'t stop reading. It was-- is amazingly done. Please continue as soon as you possibly can!
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait which one is dead
person TwilightPro101
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is HOT! HOT! HOT! with a very strong story going on.