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for Underwater love

by asianatioation

person ravinder
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is probably one of the most unique and beautifully written stories that i have ever read before! keep up the good work!!!
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very eloquent and original Cohesive. Paints a tapestry of color. Probably could use a tad more angst, but altogether,well thot out
person asswhole
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this reminds me of that sex pistols song submission...

\'i cant figure out your watery love i gotta solve your mystery something something something something we\'re having a ball\'

nice with the words.