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for .Snake Woman

by keithcompany

schedule April 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like Fay.  She's the kind of woman that I would want my daughter to be had I ever fathered any children.  Lamia is a great character as well.  I presume that if Lamia were somehow retuned to her true scale she would be approximately 36 feet long with a body width and thickness of 18 to 24 inches.  Is that about the right dimensions?

person Dahna
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story!
person Kyuubi
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you should make something else like this, maybe a sequal, like getting Lamia back to normal size or somethin.(yuri and tent are my favs.)
person Shukaku
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Abslutely wonderful, you should listen to the fox-bastard(Kyuubi:Raccon-faced imbecile!) and make a sequal.(beast is my fav. but anthro is right up there)
person Kyuubi
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic, if anyine badmouths it then they are complete retards
person SIzeviewer
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It was well thought out and beuatifully written.The shrinking theme with the transformation of the snake women impliedat an earlier time was very well placed.I also liked the way the wizard met his end.I would like to see this as a series.I would reccomend this story to anyone into the shrinking theme or anyone who likes a good story
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person Haruhi
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that last bit of humor was great, but of course I\'m mean by nature though^__^
person seeThru
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A hawt and happy ending - well not for the rats, but that\'s okay. I really liked how Fay and Lamia worked together to kill the wizard. And thank you for double spacing. It makes the reading much more pleasant. Hurrah for Keith!
person talon
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good capture, especially the immobilization, and great escape!

tal :D
person bd
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!!! please continue soon, the cliffhangar is killin me!