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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Okay. For a minute I thought there were major problems in the whole story. Yeah, I\'ll go back and fix any typos, people. I type at probably over 100 words a minute and the spelling and grammar checker can only help you but so much. A word may be spelled right, but it won\'t check if it actually makes sense, so yeah, I\'ll fix it tomorrow!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Please continue!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait. Looks like the the nex chapter is going to be good.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hope you update soon!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written...I rather enjoyed it, ^-^ VERY GOOD! UPDATE!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Okay... just take your time, no need to hurry or anything. Well i hope you update SOON!!!!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not confusedyet. you are doing a great job!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm... i dunno, but it seems fine with me!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, your story is really very good, no missing details here, so you don\'t need to worry because you\'re a very talented writer. Just keep on writing and be happy!! :-)
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite interesting. Somethings missing in some places though...details or something. Explanaitions...don\'t know, but it is good.